Monday, February 4, 2013

From Diane Eason

Vanguard member, Diane Eason, sent this WIP this morning for your critique. She says she has looked at this one so long that she feels she needs some fresh eyes to help her finish it.

Anyone see anything to help her?


  1. Diane, I love the dreamy quality of this one! The only suggestion I would make is that the rest of the painting is so filmy/gauzy/barely there (can't find the right term I am looking for here!)except for the lips, which draw my eyes immediately to that spot. This also happens to be the center of the painting, so maybe if you toned the lips down some that would make this nice painting even better?

  2. My dear Susan - Thanks for the advice - i can see you are correct and I will change this.